請給點意見我﹗
我幫我妹妹設計的封面﹗
明天就要呈交了﹗
其實我只想知道封面還可以嗎?
它的設計
什么主题？
u didn’t mention the objective of the task…
we would able to know how to give you the correct comments…
or you just want people here give the comments nice…pretty… good…??
actually that is a magazine cover~…
the objecitve is CHANGE…
the my sis decided to wrote about her life…~
oh…
to me…it is nice enuff…for 16 below
jz wondering what does the word PENCIL…for…
oops… how young is yo sis…
pencil那个还可以丰富点！彩色看起来有点幼稚园的。
用粗点的字款会好点！
依我经验，每一个design都有自己的colour theme的
颜色会不会太花了点？
下面是引用闇之暗于2006-06-29 01:24 PM发表的:
oh…
to me…it is nice enuff…for 16 below
jz wondering what does the word PENCIL…for…oops… how young is yo sis…
haha~…my sis just 16 only…
why she will choose the Pencil title?
pencil…when not sharp then must sharped it…~
so it changed…(this is what my sis told me)
coz since she came to australia study,everything was changed!
下面是引用怡雯于2006-06-29 01:31 PM发表的:
haha~…my sis just 16 only…
why she will choose the Pencil title?
pencil…when not sharp then must sharped it…~
…
mean…got mention inside the contents?
but I don’t think it suit the thing you want to express, change n sharped…
maybe I cann’t figure out what you mean…hee…
sorry for interrupt…
just my personal comments…
pencil 的字体粗一些会比较抢眼。。。
下面是引用闇之暗于2006-06-29 01:34 PM发表的:
mean…got mention inside the contents?
…
haha~>…wait 2 minutes~show u something
下面是引用john790515于2006-06-29 01:37 PM发表的:
pencil 的字体粗一些会比较抢眼。。。
我認為蠻多人對PENCIL的線條有意見。。
那我就試著從這方面著手﹗
謝謝﹗
Already 20mins
still don’t hv any life sign from u…
kaka…
恩… 如果是我… 我會選擇比較成熟的顏色… 太現艷了…不過還是很漂亮. 不要介意哦…只是我的個人意見… 如果是changed的主題…應該是舊舊的感覺
me also give idea… colour for me is quite not match and too light jor…for interview i think is quite not suitable